Very visual poem...flows very nicely....enjoyable read...5/5 read my latest "A DEMONS PRAYER" vote and comment thank you

Wow very thought provoking I loved it. It was pretty insightful and personally made me consider how the earth was created from chaos and now has almost returned to that state. I loved your word choice also. all in all a great poem 5

This poem was amazing and not what I expected it to turn out to be. When you picked this title, i was expecting a sappy love story and I'm sooooooooooooooooooooo glad you didn't do it lol. This poem is gorgeous and has a mysterious, misunderstood feeling to it, like a child scared of the boogie man in his closest kind of feeling. Excellent poem. Keep up the good writing :)

Love it! Not at all what I had expected with a title like that, but once again your wording did the trick! :] I really liked reading this one, your poems are all so great.

"Angels have all scattered, leaving their wings,"

^^ That line on its own is AMAZING!

Keep up the great work Dear.

5.5
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