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by Courtney Jul 20, 2007 category : Love, romance / lasting love
Inside I always though I was lucky that I found Someone who cared and loved me, Someone who would always stick around First time, struck out, thought we'd be forever Never thought we'd break up, Always wanted to be forever Didn't know what to do with myself,didn't know what to say Always fronted putting a smile on, But inside it wasn't okay Couldn't believe he did that, never thought love was wrong But I couldn't let it get to me, I told myself to be strong 2 months went by, never talked never fight Guess those who doubted us, Just turned out to be right Wanted to work it out, I always shead tears Gave him my heart, he dropped me, He dropped our 3 years Didn't believe at first only because of what he did He has an adult mind, But makes decisions like a kid April 27, 2007 some may call me dumb But he's the one I love, Guess you can call me "Dumb in Love" But I live a life of secret, I don't know what to say Not to him, but my family, Because I know it's not "okay" But now I'm gonna follow "me", something I should have done from the start Not going by friends or family members, But I'm going with my heart First time struck out, Second times around I surely won't doubt That we can stay together and work this "Us" thing out...
by ABake
Wow. This was adorable. I love the way your words flow and how you portray your emotions. Great job! 5/5 ((Amber))
by Norbert
I loved it! I like how you did your rhymes.