I like it very much. Superbly written poem. Every stanza is written incredibly and flow is excellent. Topic is also great.
Well done, this one really deserves 5/5

This is goood !!
it kept me interested the whole way and the flow was great !
i can kinda relate to this one.
5/5

xo.louiii

This is a wonderful piece of work...you have kept the reader interested from the beginning until the end which make it an excellent write. Without change there can be no future. May peace and joy fill your heart each and everyday.

sadaddy