Wow keenan, i really liked this poem. You said so much, in such little words. I loved it alot, it's really great. Plus it's different from the rest of your poems, it was really good! I think it was great!!

Short and Sweet great combo!!! Like lol a waffle cone and soft serve ice cream lmao.. You've got talent;) Talk to you later Keenan.

Beck

Aha. Another cute piece, but amusing as hell. :) Best wishes! Hehe.

Awesome poem alot of emotion i see
good job

ashleigh