by XdangerouslyXgenuineX Jul 20, 2007
category :
Friendship, family /
love, friendship
Tonight, we will leave the last of our pieces behind and set ourselves free. |
Nicely done. Your poems are really easy to understand. and very well worded. Keep up the good work and comment my stuff when you get the chance. i don't have much yet, but i'm new at this poetry thing. |
by Sparks
Clear message and well worded good job mate. |
by Nikki
Aaw the imagery in this poem is gorgeous, I could seriously picture the moment in my mind and it flowed really well to! Keep it up :) |
I loved it great imagery and creativity linking it to our lives great job!!!5/5 |
Your poems are really clear. I like them. Keep them going. |