Whoa this is a great poem there are some really really great lines in this such as
"Our fairy tale come true is now our nightmare in disguise."
that was my fav line really good job!!

Keenan

Beautifully written; perfect wording.
It all just fit together so well, m'dear.
Too bad 5/5 is the highest you can give.
BECAUSE YOU DESERVE BETTER! Lol.
And to Keenan comment,
"Some really really great lines?"
ARE YOU BLIND! More like ALL really really great lines, gosh. -.-
Lol.

-Heather