Wow im really liiken this poem lol it has great rythme(srry bad at spellen) and i love the message its given!!!

U thought my poems was good u da 1 wit da real flo

I like how you kept repeating it :]
and the message you put across
good luck with him tho :D

sorry my comment took so long to come, my computer wouldnt tell me i had new ones :/

Hey great poem, liked the flow