by aDORKable x3 Jul 21, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
(Chorus 1) |
I love these lyrics, very cute..could imagine this being sung and I like how you added in the extra bits to allow the reader to be able to read it more as a song than as just a poem. Great job Hunn. |
by Nix
Interesting poem. I don't like rhyming but flow is great and atmosphere that you created is excellent. |
by *Charisma*
Very pretty...and I can picture it to be so soothing and calming. I really love it. |