Very pretty...and I can picture it to be so soothing and calming. I really love it.
Charisma*

Interesting poem. I don't like rhyming but flow is great and atmosphere that you created is excellent.

I love these lyrics, very cute..could imagine this being sung and I like how you added in the extra bits to allow the reader to be able to read it more as a song than as just a poem. Great job Hunn.

5.5
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