That one place is every reader's heart and thats where you will stay forever. |
by debbylyn
Beautiful and sad.....excellent as always......love you Cindy! |
by BlueDreams
Cindy dear; Once again you touch me with your beautiful sad penned you portrait here...Beautiful.. "No matter how hopeless the present problem may seem, remember: This, too, shall pass...and More things are accomplished by prayer than the world realizes." |
by Mr M
Such a well written piece...and so touching |
by June
Your writes never fail to touch my heart ,this one was no exception ,sad yet beautifully done. |
Cindy you seem to be in a phase of your life which is making you sad.Just count your blessings and be cheerful again.5/5 beautiful write-could read you through.God bless. |
by Boy
Your one stanza explain whole the story of your poem |
by Bryan
Tis a very good and sad poem cindy, on the second line in the last stanza to should be too, love the flow, i give a perfect 5/5!!! |
by Fsams
Wow cindy I am speechless! :-). Your poem is awesome. So beautiful and brimming with grief and mournful feelings. Nicely worded and best written. Poetic and outstanding. tc |
by Lithium
And that one place is here :) hehe great poem cindy no doubts about that xox sam |
by knnymchl91
VERY good and sad. I love it! |
by moonlil
That's a truly wonderful and heartfelt poem. I can relate to it like to most of your poems. It really touched my heart. I can feel the sadness of this poem. Great work. |
Beautiful poem Cindy, wonderfully written and the wording was marvelous, it was very sad and I feel your need for wanting more and understand you, thanks for sharing such a wonderful write , always a pleasure to read, my favorite lines, ; |
by Debbie
It was bitter and sweet at the same time. I take it as fighting the good fight or something. But it never failed to reach out and tug my heart. Simply terrific and lovely. All the best! |
by sara
Beautiful!! that's all I can say |
by SunDown Sky
Very very nice |
by Mr M
Top rated...me too. I just had to comment about how well dritten this poem is again...you are so touching with your words. |
by Rachel RTVW
What a sad longing is portrayed in this piece. Nicely done although it brings a tear to the eye... |
by Zara Baines
That end paragraph is quality |
by ABake
This was beautiful. |