Comments : Take My Hand

  • 17 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    That one place is every reader's heart and thats where you will stay forever.

    Lovely write indeed my friend

    all the best and take care

  • 17 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Beautiful and sad.....excellent as always......love you Cindy!

  • 17 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    Cindy dear; Once again you touch me with your beautiful sad penned you portrait here...Beautiful.. "No matter how hopeless the present problem may seem, remember: This, too, shall pass...and More things are accomplished by prayer than the world realizes."

    Best wishes... Bert.

  • 17 years ago

    by Mr M

    Such a well written piece...and so touching

  • 17 years ago

    by June

    Your writes never fail to touch my heart ,this one was no exception ,sad yet beautifully done.

  • 17 years ago

    by alka mendiratta

    Cindy you seem to be in a phase of your life which is making you sad.Just count your blessings and be cheerful again.5/5 beautiful write-could read you through.God bless.

  • 17 years ago

    by Boy

    Your one stanza explain whole the story of your poem

    Please come take my hand
    It's been way to long
    Looking for a way out
    Only one place I belong

    and i loved that stanza alot. such a nice and sad poem. always 5/5
    take care

  • 17 years ago

    by Bryan

    Tis a very good and sad poem cindy, on the second line in the last stanza to should be too, love the flow, i give a perfect 5/5!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Fsams

    Wow cindy I am speechless! :-). Your poem is awesome. So beautiful and brimming with grief and mournful feelings. Nicely worded and best written. Poetic and outstanding. tc
    with love
    Fsams

  • 17 years ago

    by Lithium

    And that one place is here :) hehe great poem cindy no doubts about that xox sam

  • 17 years ago

    by knnymchl91

    VERY good and sad. I love it!

  • 17 years ago

    by moonlil

    That's a truly wonderful and heartfelt poem. I can relate to it like to most of your poems. It really touched my heart. I can feel the sadness of this poem. Great work.

  • 17 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    Beautiful poem Cindy, wonderfully written and the wording was marvelous, it was very sad and I feel your need for wanting more and understand you, thanks for sharing such a wonderful write , always a pleasure to read, my favorite lines, ;
    Life has become so hard
    Pushing through each day
    Trying too see some light
    Darkness blocks the way

    Extremely well done ,,, your friend Tracy d 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Debbie

    It was bitter and sweet at the same time. I take it as fighting the good fight or something. But it never failed to reach out and tug my heart. Simply terrific and lovely. All the best!

  • 17 years ago

    by sara

    Beautiful!! that's all I can say

  • 17 years ago

    by SunDown Sky

    Very very nice

  • 17 years ago

    by Mr M

    Top rated...me too. I just had to comment about how well dritten this poem is again...you are so touching with your words.

  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    What a sad longing is portrayed in this piece. Nicely done although it brings a tear to the eye...

  • 17 years ago

    by Zara Baines

    That end paragraph is quality

  • 17 years ago

    by ABake

    This was beautiful.
    The short stanzas seemed to deepen the emotion. Such simple words yet so much meaning.
    And your flow was awesome.
    Great job!
    Take Care,
    Amber