This poem was ok.
Just wish it could go further. Keep up the good work.

Feel free to cum and check out my poems. :)

I liked the way this shows that even after you've split up with a person they can still effect your life so much.

nicely done

I like this poem very much u did a very good job

Aww, it is very nice,, i like how u show ur feelings about this person even though u split up with them,, great job.
Janaynay