by joe m durham Jul 21, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Everyday he sits on his computer writing about the same girl it doesn't help it doesn't work cuz still she cant see she's his world every word he speaks he write its of her and those memorable nights he mentions the kisses the hugs the laughs the love they use to shear but now he cries cuz she's no longer there |
VerY lovinG sentenceS yoU useD herE. mE luV yR stylE oF writinG thaT keepS mE verY joY..... 5/5 |
by AmberSherrellxxIve Been Sitting Here Trying To Find Myselfxx
Awwwwww!That was really sweet.I could tell that it came from the heart.Have you told her how you feel???Just asking.Umm..I think the poem was a little short but it got the message across.I think it would've been a lot better if you would've put it into stanzas.But all in all 5/5 |
by danielle
OMG this is soooo sweet and i loved it keep em comin and ttyl |
by LiNa
Love this poem it seem like ur in love and it just dosnt go away it happends to all of us trust me but i loved it . |
by sheila
Awwwwwwww great poem i love it keep it up |