Comments : The Secrets of Una

  • 17 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    Lovely poems yet so heartfelt penned.... Breathtaking!

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Doug
    What a breathtakingly penned piece.

    In Nighttime's light of moonbeams falling,
    My heart and soul are ever calling
    Into a moment's instant sought
    Where lies your pleasing love so caught.

    Every stanza is wonderful. This one just touched me.
    Take care Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Your eyes, your smile so set the night

    ^very nicely said.....and the these lines:

    Beyond the morrows yet conceived
    Lie dreams and hopes of you perceived

    ^wishes for tomorrow....what can be better.....love the whole piece!

  • 17 years ago

    by Debbie

    This is one of the finer love poems I've come across on this website which I thoroughly delight in reading. Its beauty is too captivating for words to describe. I adored it, nevertheless. :] Thanks for sharing!

  • 17 years ago

    by Monica AKA Mika

    I really liked this poem...it was very emotional and i can understand exactly what you are talkin about...your a great writter..keep it up...

  • 17 years ago

    by sarah

    O wow! dat poem was truly beautiful, it flowed perfectly as wel. keep up the gd wrk!

  • 17 years ago

    by Sunshine

    Very beautifullly penned. Much enjoyed reading

  • 17 years ago

    by kelly

    Wow. Wow. Wow.
    Whenever I come on her I see a lot of poorly written poems that use cheap rhymes and though I try to stay clear of that I still find myself doing it.
    But,
    You have made such a beautiful image in my mind with this wonderfully worded piece of poetry and I have to stay it moved me deeply.
    Probably the best poem I've read on Poems-And-Quotes.

    "Upon the wings of Beauty's flight,
    Your eyes, your smile so set the night
    And travel where such wonders soar
    To ever touch my heart's implore."

    Lovely, absolutely lovely.

    Kelly

  • 17 years ago

    by Len

    What a great poem. Thank you for sharing!

  • 17 years ago

    by Kyra

    This is an excellent poem great read. 5/5
    ~Kyra~

  • 17 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    A wonderful write, Excellently penned love poem, great job, bravo!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Mr M

    Thank you so much for your comments Robert. If you like forums, you might want to pop in and have alook at this one also:

    http://www.forumsvibe.com/poetry/index.php?mforum=poetry

    Hopeto seeyou there and thanks again!
    M