Final Goodbye

by Goran Rahim   Jul 21, 2007


For the first time I was worried about life,
When my doctor told me soon I will die.
Tears fell down my cheeks,
As I know the doctor would not lie.

I am not worried for leaving this life,
I am worried as I couldn't prove my love to you.
My age is at its last moments, yet
I didn't hear a nice word from you.

This time doctors have no hope,
There is no cure for this pain.
The only smile that kept me alive,
Now turned out to be vain.

So now I am a guest of few days,
Yet I will not ask you to be nice.
But don't let me down in my last moments,
Please for the first time be wise.

Consider this note as my final goodbye,
As you wouldn't see me again ever.
Yet I am dying with your love in my heart
The same guy you hated forever.

*** written for a contest of (the hearts with a talent)

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  • 17 years ago

    by Fsams

    Excellent piec of poetry, I loved the beautiful flow and the exceptionally great wordings plus the rythm and the way it is structured. Superb 5/5 all the way

    Tc
    Fsams

  • 17 years ago

    by nikki

    I absolutely loved it. theway you expressed your point in the words was amazing. it was deep, emotional and well thought of. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by TwiztidJuggalette

    Wow...That really deep...Had alot of emotion..
    It was written so beautifully...Yet kind of sad...

    The flow was flawless throughout the whole thing and the vocab was just right...

    Overall 5/5 ... =]

    Good Luck On The Contest!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Wow this poem is amazing! i love it.... its so sad....and so touching..i felt the emotion in it... 5/5 great write!

  • 17 years ago

    by Debbie

    Nicely done. Even if it was purposely written for a contest, your character shines within the words you chose. Take care, Debbie

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