It was really sweet...i liked it, big words confuse me a bit, but good poem

Hi Doug,

Wonderful metehoric write. I had to read it a couple of times before I got the jest of it. Quite an unusual rhyme scheme too. Especidally loved these lines:

"I didn't know how to pluck my spirit,
But I found it much easier than I had thought
For even the clam who labored to bear it
Had felt the purity of my love, too."

Very well done. Beautiful rhythmn.

Always,
Jeannie

Wonderful poem! I hope whoever you wrote this of had the chance to read it... :) 5/5

Aha, I caught you on the act of misdeed! :)

The idea of defying the 'laws of nature' for love's triumph have somehow appealed to me. I may as well follow your example, Mr. M. Who knows? Haha. {;)

Seriously, I liked it. Poignant to say the least. The pearl, huh. Nice.

Excellent write. Such a unique topic as well, it really captured my attention!
Beautiful words
5/5
*gem*

Your poets heart unfurls itself willingly and lends its words to us to float and drift among our own words. Good work, I enjoyed your poem and look forward to more.

What a cleaver way to praise a poem...thanks so much Tom.