Whisper in my ear, tell me its okay
I need to know why you don't want to stay
I didn't think you would just leave me like this
Your kisses so sweet, is something I'll miss
As you walk out the door, leaving me stranded
I know you will be going to see her, its what you wanted
You always wanted her, you never loved me
I was just blinded by your lies, I just didn't see
All the pieces fell, after you said you were leaving I was wordless
I'll pick up what I can but what's left is yours, I promise
I will move on, not love you one day
Now this is the time that you walk away
Very powerful piece, thought your softness and sadness are gleaming through all this poem. I found it very sweet. Specialy loved the ending.
Keep it up! 5/5
