Black cloud

by Infected with His Deadly Love   Jul 21, 2007


Under the black cloud
Lays a lonely young boy
Where did his parents go?
He just doesn't know

They said they will be back
To take him back home
But did they ever come?
The answer is no

He prays to God
To save him tonight
But he doesn't know
If he was listening

He's waited and waited
For someone to save him
But no one came
No one will be his hero

He will die here alone
But he will be with his parents
Up in heaven you see
He just doesn't know

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  • 17 years ago

    by Romancing the Darker Side

    I think the title fit appropriately. Although it was short, I think it told a pretty nice story. I think it could have been a little mroe deep, though.

  • 17 years ago

    by Riz

    This is...T~T sad yet so meaningful. I actually love the ending! I mean, he won't be alone because his parents will take him there and that's a good thing. ^_^ nice poem! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Alicia

    There was a lot of emotion here. It was very good. 5/5

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