Still waiting...

by Ajmal   Jul 21, 2007


Still waiting...

The sun is rising and setting behind the ocean...
the moon is glowing and hiding within the clouds
wind is blowing hard and taking everything...away.
night is appearing to make shadows disappear
I dont know why iam still waiting...
waiting...in this dark.

There are lot of things to do.
there are so many places to go.
there are so many broken things to fix.
there are so many things to learn.
there is so many goals to achieve.
i dont know why? iam still waiting...
waiting...for what to change.

you made me still..still like a stone.
my world is stopped..stopped to begin.
take away my world...take away my sky.
now you became my world... my sky.
everything is moving... I am still
started to walk everything seems still
i dont know why? iam still waiting..
waiting... for what to see...what to hear.

Iam glad You came back,where you belong,
is an opportunity to go some distance along.
now the wind started to breeze softly,
world started to look colourful through your beauty.
now your smile makes the sky blue again...
i dont know why? iam still waiting...
waiting... for you to feel...the same.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Heba

    It was really so touching and so sad.It reminded of some friends who I have lost them many years ago,but still haven't lost the hope to see them again.

    well done 5\5...

  • 16 years ago

    by Filledwithjoy

    Thats so beautiful...i had a dream about everyting aruond me moving at lightning fast speed yet i was still...your poem really relates to that...where are we in this world? Everything is moving but we are waiting for people we lvoe...it is amazing...

  • 17 years ago

    by Filledwithjoy

    Nope...not cool. Thats too awsome. Why must you be so talented and able to express you emotions in such a beautiful way?????

  • 17 years ago

    by Meme

    Really nice job
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    Beautiful writings..
    Excellent thoughts..
    Marvelous outlooks..
    Fantastic feelings..
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    Write more, feel more and be with me for reading and commenting.. I like your poems very much indeed... 5/5

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