The Rain Collaboration

by FlowerThatDied   Jul 21, 2007


Dancing in glistening rain,
Lost it all again,
But am I afraid I think not...
I've got my friends, they mean alot,
I will keep running from doors,
Tripping on steps and hitting floors,
And I will keep falling, alone,
I will keep dancing like I have no home,
And I won't need you no more,
I hope your alone so you know what you did,
To...
Did to me, Did to me,
Broke me so badly,
You crossed the line, crossed the line,
I'm so tired of trying,
I hope you feel, hope you feel,
What's it's like to be alone...
When no one's home,
To Fall from the sky, tonight,
I hope...you know what's it's like to cry!

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  • 17 years ago

    by Prophecies In Kodak

    Hm. I liked.. The repetition in this.
    The form was sketchy, but I really did like the way you repeated things like, "did to me, did to me," Relaly good job.

  • 17 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Thats really good use of languag well done whata good poem xxx