by AmberSherrellxxIve Been Sitting Here Trying To Find Myselfxx Jul 21, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Blades and razors |
I know the feeling about this also.. i thought people cared for me and then it goes to show there aint no1 there.. do u really cut? well i like this alot. keep up the good work.. i rated this a 5 |
by Dustin Cole
I love it i kno exactly how that feels |
Another very good poem =) I love how strong the emotions flow through your work and make the reader actually feel them =) But I'd change "was" to "were" in the 4th line, it would fit in better ^_^ All in all a fantastic poem =D 5/5 |
This was rather good. I am going to be honest I hated the last line...but otherwise very nice. |
by Michelle18
Wow! amazing poem....i really like it. 5/5 |