by ABake Jul 21, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
The walls are closing in. |
by willowoman
Dame girl how do you do it your only 13? |
Full of emotion.....nice poem 5/5 |
by Sarah
Oh wow..really beautifully written..even tho it was short I really leiked it..very sad.. emotional..powerful words..well done..good job |
by Katie
I don't think the short lines takes away from the poem or the meaning. I like it. Great job. |
This was a beautiful and emotional poem...i really like the way your emotion poured it self out wit your words...keep writing... |