Brody (Acrostic)

by TwiztidJuggalette   Jul 21, 2007


Be very gentle to me,
Realize I'm always going to be here,
Often think of me when you're gone,
Don't you ever forget me, because
You're the man I love....<3

Okay so this is my first Acrostic type of poem...I'm sorry if it sucks....

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  • 17 years ago

    by Blissful

    Aww this was so sweet and cute. I loved the simple lines and beauty behind it . It was wonderful. Well done *5/5*

  • 17 years ago

    by Spirit

    Sure it needs some work but it is still from your heart and thats all that matters. don't ever worry about what people think otherwis you'll be trying to impress them your whole life.

  • 17 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    NicE poeM.
    VerY truE.
    EnjoyeD readinG iT.
    TakE carE...

    LUZAn

  • 17 years ago

    by Miu

    Awww Its simple and cute. Joyful to read and makes smile. Streight to point:) Try writing more Acrostic ones :)
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by CompletelyIncomplete

    Being the first acrostic, I think it is good, corret the bloomer in line 3 (your/you're)

    Make it long and it will be fine

    3.5 Cmpinc

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