I like it alot!I know how it is to give your heart to someone and you're scared you're going to get hurt.5/5

<3Amber

I think it's cute =] And very well written for a first acrostic =) I got one similair to it.. called "Michael"
Anyways..
5/5 =]

This is simple and superb. Very well adhered to the rule plus nicely kept flow. I like your wordings. They are great. Keep it up. tc

Fsams

It's simple and straight to the point. ^w^ AND REALLY MOOOOOEEEEE!! (XD Moe) Nice poem although you shoud put more of it. You know, THE WORDS OF LOVE! 5/5

Awww it doesnt suck btw you spelt going wrong lol missing the i but thats about it simply put :)

Aww short and sweet. great job, acrostics are hard, just keep trying it, can't do anything more than try!!! good flow, good vocab, good grammar, all the technical stuff was good and the emotion and sincerity were excellent, great poem. 5/5

I really like this....it flows very well...these poems are so hard to write and you did it beautifully!! :)

Awsome loved it it feels unfinished though

Aww very cute and good for your first one nice job I loved it
by the way your vocab was good too
5/5
kaila

Poetry doesn't 'suck'. There's not such thing as a bad piece, just a piece that could use improvement. I happened to like this piece. It was well written with just a tiny mistake ((your should be you're)). Good job. The emotion was felt.
Take Care!
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Ciao
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This is a great poem
good acrostics are hard to come to
since they are usually short
but you pulled it off very good
good job

keenan

I liked it.
It was simple and to the point=]
And at the same time it has greater meaning.
Which is good.

I just liked it alot.

Wow your first acrostic poem makes the top rated love poems, oh yeah it sucks lol 5/5 for sure

I love it!
It's short, and to the point.
Very sweet.
<3

This poem is very straight to the point of how you feel about this person, its very good, keep up the good work

I love this poe...great job

Actually, I think it's pretty good :)

It does not suck! It's good, but I have never heard of and Acrostic poem? What is it?

It doesn't suck, and it's a sweet write. It doesn't jump out, and I wouldn't say it's "Wow, amazing!" but it was lovely to read.

"Often think of me when your gone," -- 'your' should be 'you're'.

Being the first acrostic, I think it is good, corret the bloomer in line 3 (your/you're)

Make it long and it will be fine

3.5 Cmpinc