Awww Its simple and cute. Joyful to read and makes smile. Streight to point:) Try writing more Acrostic ones :)
5/5

NicE poeM.
VerY truE.
EnjoyeD readinG iT.
TakE carE...

LUZAn

Sure it needs some work but it is still from your heart and thats all that matters. don't ever worry about what people think otherwis you'll be trying to impress them your whole life.

Aww this was so sweet and cute. I loved the simple lines and beauty behind it . It was wonderful. Well done *5/5*