For the style and the type i think its amazing!!! good job!!

Keenan,
This poem was really great,
I love these poems.
You did a fantastic job,
great great great job!!!

I like it...Do you like someone or what otherwise you girl in your dreams does she have a brother?? lol great job Keenan:)

Beck

Great poem as always thanks for the comment

Love it

That's very, very cute. Falling in Love is one of the most wonderful feelings--no, no, it's the most wonderful feeling you'll ever feel in this lifetime and beyond, and it nevertheless brings you back to your own real self. It's a gift, and the gift of love is [in] nature. Cherish it for ever, m'dear. You 'banged' me with a piece of work which I could thoroughly correlate with myself. :]

Hehe awww i loved it keekee! sounds like ur in love! hehe

Awesome style of pem and just as good as the last
good job

ashleigh

Etheree's are my favorite poetry form.
Great job!
Take Care Cindy

Good job mann great poem