This is scary yet so goood! Oh my gosh, when I was reading through it, I could hear my heartbeat beating! And at the end, I scream because I thought my heart would stop beating. T~T tis scary but a success!! I could actually feel it, especially the heart beat thing! Or was it just my imagination. ^^ anyhow, awesome job at this!

Sometimes death isn't a thing to be feared...it can be a release.