Only maybe

by Baby Rainbow   Jul 21, 2007


I keep picturing it in my head
it wont go away
i wont get to see your smile
i wont hear what you say

no more cuddles or kisses
it just keeps making me cry
that in a few days soon
i know we'll have to say goodbye

you've done so much for me
taught me more than you realize
everything just goes away
with one look in your eyes

it just hurts so much
the distance just causes more pain
knowing that maybe, only a small maybe
i might get to see you again.

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  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Beautiful piece! Thanks for your comment on my own poetry. Love the comments! Your first two stanzas were my favorite, but your line about it being 'only a small maybe' was very creative and neat too!
    Charisma*

  • 17 years ago

    by Innocent Danger

    I really like this
    Keepp up the good work , I love how ur peoms are so deep and you can tell the feelings are real and that the making of truly amazing poet

  • 17 years ago

    by Somber Esprit

    I like it! lots of feeling. good work.

  • 17 years ago

    by Jay

    Thanx 4 ur comment ur good 2 x

  • 17 years ago

    by robin milford

    Great poem thanks for the comment