by xoxcalichickxox Jul 22, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
As the hands of time change and feelings fade away, my heart seems to get weaker and weaker by the minute. You broke my heart and left a permanant mark. i'll never be the same. how do u do it? go on living your life as if nothing happened? dont u understand u killed me inside? i guess not..i've made my decision, it wasnt easy to make, but it'll be worth it..im letting u go and leaving forever...* |
by Sweet lig
You know i like ur poem specially the lines i can truly feel ur feels inside,, and i can relate at the same time.. one thing u have to arrange in great form and u can see it is more better.. anyway, nice one! 5/5 |
by Goran Rahim
Good poem, you just have tp change the form and style around to make it greater. |