Wow....i started crying when i read this...i've actually done all this...i still am doing everything in your poem

Ok the poem was good except a few parts you need to really watch your syllabal counts. it can make you or break you when it comes to a poem. The story line and the meaning behind this poem were just amazing so great work with that.
4/5
*kaila*

Wow, great poem... sad though. But again, your talent truly shines in your poems, great job! :)

I don't know what you're talking about, this poem is just as good [if not better] then mine! ~ I've done the unhealthy eating thing and can relate ~ Great job ~