Walking down the street..

by BlueEyedMystery   Jul 22, 2007


Walking down the street,
Watching people pass by,
Sweethearts and lovers,
Are catching my eye.

They're holding hands,
Not looking ahead,
Eyes are on each other,
Loving words are said.

I force myself to look away,
Before I start thinking of you,
Wanting to forget your love,
How it broke my heart in two.

No matter how hard I try,
My mind wanders to you,
I can't seem to stop it,
No matter what I do.

Walking down the street,
You're now on my mind,
Wishing you were here,
Wanting your love to find..
Me.

*I think my writing skills have vanished...

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  • 16 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Wow, excellent write. I absolutly loved the flow of this poem. Your choice of words was good, but I felt it was averege and could be a little better.

    The use of you, me, and I was used a little too much I felt, and by toning those down I think the poem would've been a lot stronger.

    Overall a wonderful write from a very talented poet.

    Peace, Joe

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