by Fsams Jul 22, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
first love
Yaad har pal teri aa ey |
by Austin
Very cool! I haven't seen this before. The translation was fun to read. Can't complain very much. Good job. 5/5 |
This is a very great poem. I love how you used two different languages.. that was unique and very interesting. Secondly, the poem entirely was very well written and very beautiful and full of emotions. Great work. 5/5. |
I cannot read hindi and it even sounded poetic and close to the heart as any poem i have ever seen. superb work |
by Heer
Your not bad ur self i gota admit.. and ur speelings arent perfect eighter in hindi translation unless ur ment to write it like that:P |
by SCARECROW
Wow~ |