Wow. i loved this, it was very deep, and it had so much emotions. it was beautifully written. 5/5

The great thing about poetry is the meaning is different for all readers, although most might not know what it's about they make an assumption. I took from the poem that even though at times in life when you think you know everything and you have all angles covered, sometimes the unexpected happens and your plans have to change. Fantastic job 5/5 GG23

Third and fourth stanza are greatest. First is bad and second is good. This piece isn't classic love poem which is great.

"My veins don't know which way to flow" that is such an EXCELLENT way to put how feeling
u have such talent in being able to create such good poems which are so deep in emotion
5/5

Another well done poem. The band does deserve credit so well done Lincolin Park= )