Wow very unique loved the style 4.5 that rounds up to a 5 lol |
Wow, this piece has so powerful imagery, and the emotions are excellently described. I like it from the beginning to the end, every stanza is greatly written. The fourth stanza is my favorite. |
by Emma
Nice job 5/5!:) keep up the work! |
WOW that was very powerful and it blew my mind ,great poem, emotions running wild here , you mastered the weather channel wonderfully written , and wording , wow that was awesome , great job,,,, your friend Tracy d,,,,,, 5/5 |
Loved this one a lot too. It was definitely unique on how you used the weather metaphors describe heartache and I love the last stanza. I wrote something similar to this using weather as metaphors for something totally different. Its fun. Keep up the great work. Writing is definitely one of your skills. |
:-( I CAN RELATE! 5/5 Beautiful explanation. Even if one hasn't felt that way, they can understand |
Wow, such a poem. wonderful choice of words i loved your poem indeed and how expressed your feelings out there |
by Tom Swart
Wow-I can feel the mist of those falling tears and think your free verse is great. I love it. Your emotions really shine here and the feelings that propel them selves into the reader are overwhelming. Thanks |
Wonderful heartfelt write, I fully enjoyed reading this poem. I loved your choice of words, everything was flawless except for puncuation, I didn't see any puncuation anywhere. The flow and structre were both good as well. Overall a great write, keep it up! |
by Amreen
Unique... Sherry, you always amaze me with your writes and this one amazed me tons... I love the way you incorporated weather with lostlove and it came out brilliantly.... |