by Mikayla
Aww this is a very good poem!! |
Despite the whole sad idea of the poem, I really like it, well, not that Im sayin the idea is bad, Id just rather read a happpier one, but then again Im in the sad poems section so yeah, well anyhow, like I said I like it, the way it was structured, and the repeating of the first few lines, great, makes the readers think theres much more, but its up to them to figure that out. Good one. |
by kristen
Thank you :) |
by Omar
Awww This was a great poem. |