Comments : Mama

  • 17 years ago

    by Mikayla

    Aww this is a very good poem!!
    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Hallucinostic

    Despite the whole sad idea of the poem, I really like it, well, not that Im sayin the idea is bad, Id just rather read a happpier one, but then again Im in the sad poems section so yeah, well anyhow, like I said I like it, the way it was structured, and the repeating of the first few lines, great, makes the readers think theres much more, but its up to them to figure that out. Good one.

  • 12 years ago

    by Omar

    Awww This was a great poem.
    Everytime i read your poem,
    i feel like my poems aren't good enough.
    I guess i got a lot more work to do.