Confusions (Collab)

by Zima Ultifera   Jul 22, 2007


What happens when you start to like two girls,
when everything in your head twirls.
You like the things one of them would do..
but the other one has your heart too...

The confusions start,
Two girls, are taking your heart,
What to do, who to take,
But in the end, my heart will always break.

I just want somebody to hold,
But once I wish for that,
All these confusions unfold,
And I'm here, alone, in the cold.

All those feelings to take,
Which will make it,
And which will break?
Confusions,

Now I'm thinking of who to chose,
Knowing, this is not how its supposed to be,
All these feelings,
I Should love one, not two or three!

//
//Hello everyone!
//Well this poem is based on recent thoughts in my head...
//I asked Birgit to make one for me, but in the end it //became a collab from the both of us.
//I hope you enjoyed reading it!
//And give some comments please?
//You should read Birgit poems too! She is a great writer!
//Thanks in advance!

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  • 17 years ago

    by XXTruthSeekerXX

    Good job. I am very picky about love poems because they usually go into two catagories. Either simple school love scribbles or top poetic masterpieces. The difference is the choice of words and the arrangement of words. How to make a poem more poetic without straying from the main point. Example:

    When two, not one, charms your very heart
    Every existing sanity goes right off the chart
    One, a seductress with a rosy tattoo
    The other more gentle, but you love her too

  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Wow i really like this poem...i can relate to it because i've liked a guy before who liked me back but also liked another girl and he had to choose...and of course i wasnt the one he chose =[ ....

    but your poem was amazing..good job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Birgit

    Aren't we just great writers.. (>'')><(''<)
    Just kidding =] Anyway, thanks for asking to write this with you =] hihi! I like how it turned out ^^
    Keep smiling!
    <3
    5/5