by Tracy D Rollings Jul 22, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Awake in the morning |
Amazing! great imagery. |
by moonlil
That's really sad.. |
by Mr M
I think this is perhaps one of the best poems I've ever read. You encapsulated everything that terrifies a child from parntal abuse. And the way you presented in from the view of isolation...well done my friend. well done. |
Hi Lina, thanks for the very nice comments , and wanted to let you know the reason I write this poems so you can feel the abuse, is because I write true poems of my life , all my abuse poems are about me and the 15 years I lived it, so thanks again for the comments they mean so much to me,your friend Tracy d |
by LiNa
You always bring a smile to my face that is a fact but i never thought tears to y eyes , wow this poem reall speaks to you and really has a story behind it and i feel the emotion as your writting it... i feel bad for the boy when there laughing at him i feel bad for him......i love this one tracy and it 's really filled with your heart i can tell. love it. |