OMG... this one is soo sad:(...i am even crying now,,,,you have a talant...thats a fact!
DEFINITELY 5/5...YOUR FAN *Melody*:)

You always bring a smile to my face that is a fact but i never thought tears to y eyes , wow this poem reall speaks to you and really has a story behind it and i feel the emotion as your writting it... i feel bad for the boy when there laughing at him i feel bad for him......i love this one tracy and it 's really filled with your heart i can tell. love it.

Hi Lina, thanks for the very nice comments , and wanted to let you know the reason I write this poems so you can feel the abuse, is because I write true poems of my life , all my abuse poems are about me and the 15 years I lived it, so thanks again for the comments they mean so much to me,your friend Tracy d

I think this is perhaps one of the best poems I've ever read. You encapsulated everything that terrifies a child from parntal abuse. And the way you presented in from the view of isolation...well done my friend. well done.

That's really sad..

Amazing! great imagery.

An angel that fell
from heavens own floor
out looking for hope
he's lost forever more.

This was my fav part.