Really great poem...i really love the ending but again..i think you should put this into stanzas...it would be much better...

i think all of the poems i read of yours are good but if you need any help just message me and i would be glad to help. =]

Also i forgot to say ^^ that maybe you should put this poem under the catagory love poems instead of misc. poems...because its more of a love poem.

This is also another great poem....

This poem was really good...The ending was just so excellent...

5/5

I LOVE IT!!!<3
it's almost exactly how i feel about me and my ex [who i broke up with because my friends didn't agree] but i told him i didn't love him... it wasn't true
5/5
-Liz