First of all thank you for commenting on my poem As time passes by.

This one is very good the strucher of this poem is simple and very effective and the repation also creats emothion I really like it.

Have you every tried writeing Haiku's I think you would be good. 3 line poem or stanza first line 5 syllables second line 7 third line 5. Give it a go

Wow i really like this one. keep it up!

Thisz isz a really good poem
i can relate alot
&& i like ur style in writing

Wow, i love your wording, and the rythem of this poem.
its short and very emotional, and relatable.
i like you style of writing, and i think its similar to mine.
deff. 5/5 fomr me, keep writing <3

I liked this, it flows quite nicely. Usually I don't like rhyme but in this case I thought it added to the write well. The ending fit really nicely. My suggestion would be to change 'you're' in the 2nd to last stanza to 'you are' just so that the syllable count is equal. Nice stuff anyway :)

- ariana

Thanks for tha comment on my poem.
i likee this one its gewd && real
alrtie ma take kare

Realy nice keep ur work up