Seems unfinished it kept me wanting more |
Seems unfinished it kept me wanting more |
by Erin
This poem is very short but writen well |
Good job. |
by Mycquel
LOL~ |
by Fsams
Very nice and interesting, I like the way you have structured and written it :) 5/5 |
Good one and love is dumb lol |
by john whalley
Really good i enjoyed it |
ThaT iS sucH aN excellenT poeM, i lovE youR worK!! |
by Tiller
Hey, sorry it took me so long to finally comment this. I like this poem. Big fan of love poems and this was a good one =) Keep writing. |
by Marc Ortiz
It was a great poem, I really like the simplicity in this poem - straight to the point, well done. |
Short poem but sweet and full of emotion 5/5 ^_^ |
by Nula
Short but good poem |
by Fear2love
Its short, but its effective enough to get the readers attention |
It is very good ^^ I like it but....im sorry for whatever happen T_T anyway I can help? |
by Krysten
Goodness...another i can relate to...short simple and to the point...pretty much my convo with my bf like 2 min ago.....i love it. 5/5 |
by Em
Short but understandable. Love is a complicated word. 5/5. Em |