Aww this is a really sweet heartfelt poem.. very toushing .. there was only ONE SMALL typing error..
'the wayhe said my name'
you just for got a space.. but other thaan that it was really touching.. i lvoed it . mad me smile!
great write!
xx

WOW what a beautiful poem , well written and so heartfelt , great write , keep it up your friend Tracy d,,,,,,,,,,5/5

Hey nice poem you got there i like it and also your other poems were good i read them but didn't comment. i will comment on them soon
good job and keep writting