This is a really sad poem sometimes love doesn't last there is always someone else out there to replace that person 5/5.

Its good chels...sad...but very good i like it alot 5/5

I love this poem.really good.

Im soooo srry my love!!!!!!!! everything will work out in time!!!!!!!!! this poem is really good!

This was a sad but strong emotinal piece. Keep writing. Great job 5/5

Awwwwwwww its so sad
that must suck
and i feel ur pain
the emotion in this
makes me wanna
jump through
that phone and bite his
head off 5/5

I loved the flow in this. It just rolled right of my tongue.
I thought this was beautifully written, while filled with such melancholy, it still made for a beautiful and interesting read.

The emotion and depth in this piece are easy to see,and the ending you chose worked wonderfully, a perfect end to this piece.