Comments : I am....

  • 17 years ago

    by Mr M

    So thought provoking and true...a nice piece

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Katie
    What an intense and deep write you have penned. Echoing pain and dispair from your words.

    I am your death
    I am your wounds
    I am your tears
    I am yours, all yours

    I AM HATE

    What an awesome ending.
    Great job!
    Take Care Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by geeeeee

    I hold onto you
    Like the chains that shackle us together
    Inside every scream
    Beneath every surface
    Deep within all hearts,
    I linger

    Amazingly descriptive! I cant even put it into words. This has just left me speechless, which doesnt happen often. You have a knack with wording things, making it seem like you do it with such ease. Wonderful job:)