by Robert Jul 22, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
It feels like yesterday since i saw you last |
by HaileyHelen
I like the fact that you asked questions because it gives the poem a realistic feel! the flow was great the rhyme scheme wasn't totally great but honestly i wouldn't change it!I think you did A beautiful job! |
by Baby Rainbow
Very good poem, im sure theyd loveto know this xxx take kare xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx |