A Million Tears

by Aish   Jul 22, 2007


Everyone was leaving,
it had gone far too quick.
The time was quite deceiving,
i gave myself a prick-

Just to see if i was dreaming,
would i wake up covered in sweat?
Would my bedclothes be all in a tangle,
would my face be soaking wet?

But no-it was reality,
a dream seemed too good to be true.
I felt like i was losing sanity,
because i was losing you.

You-sweet as a rose,
friend-true to your heart.
But no one did suppose,
that it would all soon turn dark.

I used to be a desert,
dry as a stormless plain.
But i feel as if I'm changing,
a million tears shall break my reign.

~Dedicated to Christie~

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  • 16 years ago

    by Isabella

    That brought tears to my eyes. It's so beautiful and sad...I can feel you pain and it reminds me of what I have felt under similar sucumstances. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by cale

    Excellent as usual
    i rather like the line 'I felt like i was losing sanity,
    because i was losing you.' i like that line :))
    yay sister love lol

  • 17 years ago

    by divine divinity

    Another beautiful poem, so short and yet so full of you feelings.

  • 17 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Great woded poem and strong emotions well done keep it up xxxx