These Days

by katy   Jul 22, 2007


These days we love,
These days we hate,
These days were jealous,
These days we worry,
These days our emotions twist us,

Why do we feel these emotions,
How do they bury so deep within our soul,
My heart aches with pain and anxiety,

I pass through each day remembering the past,
Remembering what happened,
I toss and turn as i try to sleep,
My mind races full of thoughts,
As i try to forget,

These days we love,
These days we hate,
These days were jealous,
These days we worry,
These days our emotions twist us,

Our feelings we experience is what makes us only human,
Sets us apart from others,
Making us individual,

Everything good and bad happens for a reason,
The reason being so we can experience life its self,
We live to thrive on emotions,
This is how we make it through each day,
Knowing the next will be full of different feelings to experience,

The eyes i see through,
The gate way to my soul,
Has seen many things,
The heart that keeps me going,
That keeps me alive,
The fragile stone of my body that is breakable,
Has ached many times,
Taken its last beat many times,
The cause of this is the emotions that run through my veins deep within my body,

We all have the same of emotions,
Whether or not you choose to follow them is your decision,
Were all different,
We have all for sure felt the greatness of love and the rawness of a heartbreak,

These days everyone has felt most of the emotions in the world,
Its this that makes us who we are.

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Thank you for reading my poem i hope you liked it, the writing style may be different than usual poem writers but i like to tell stories in my poems, i just hope you all liked it, please comment, thanks :) xxx

I have just edited this poem so hopefully i have changed it for the better :) please tell me what you think of the changes, thanks xx

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  • 17 years ago

    by Devon

    I think this is very beautiful. You have such an amazing tallent. Never stop writing. :]

    --Devon.

  • 17 years ago

    by Connie

    I enjoyed this poem very much, and the message! Great Job!

  • 17 years ago

    by BreakMyWingsAndRun

    Great job!! another 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Hebe

    Good poem.
    Sounds more like a story indeed, yet is good written.
    Enjoyed reading it.
    Well done.
    Take care

  • 17 years ago

    by Angel Writer 101

    Hmmm
    well since u asked me to criticize wat u wrote i will do just that. i like what u wrote in here, but u didnt create that poetic feeling. like u dont need rymes n stuff but u didnt have the beat. like it was jumbled up. i think u wanted to convey soemthing and say something at the same time so it didnt work out but ima read more so we shall see

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