Hey i love stories to.i love this poem its excellent:)5/5

Hey

firstly

The eyes i see through
Also known as the gate way to my soul
Has seen may things

i think its meant to say many on the last line

this is orignal but it does sound more of a story than a poem, it could be known as freestyle but its just abit to conversation like
could be just me but i didnt really feel this one sorry :)

Great poem!!! ^_^ it made meh think (and in the summer, thats hard xD) but, there wuz one problem, i would like to see a better flow with the words... but, thats just a suggestion. plz dont get mad at meh for saying that >.< thats wut lots of ppl do...-.- but i like this poem a lot! its really true... keep it up!!!
~*~skye~*~

This is the first poem that didnd ryme alot that i loved

Wow fantastic,i could learn alot from you as i cant write poems that do not rhyme!! well done it was great 5/5

After reading your poems, I think you have a
great imagination with the talent to pen it on
paper keeping the reader captured in thought.
Rhyme or no rhyme your original style of writing
poems I believe has a flair for song writing and
or short stories. Excellent job well done and thank you for sharing Write On,
Bogie

Again the true picture. i loved the way you have expressed the feelings

5/5

Emotions were clear.
Flow was well done..
Depth and insight were provided.
You did wonders with this one.
Good work.
Overall Rating: 4.7/5

I liked it very well written

I really like it but since you wrote about this topic I thought it should be more emotional nice poem though 4/5

I like how on some of the stanza you us
These days,
those ones really stick out to me. this was amazing nice job def 5/5

I like poems that are written as stories, and this one I deffinately enjoyed. You could make a song out of it too.. cause of the repitition of:
"These days we love
These days we hate
These days we become jealous
These days we worry
These days our emotions get the better of us"

Really good poem. And nice thoughts about it.
Oh, what I also enjoyed was this stanza:
"All the emotions we experience is what makes us human
Sets us apart from others
Making us individual " Really, beautiful! =]
5/5!

xxx <3

This is a great poem
you worded it well
and it has a nice flow
greatjob:):)

Keenan

As you said, the writing style is different from the most of the others' but it's still wonderful. All of your poems are very meaningfulls as they are different than others' and that's what makes you a great poet!

Loved this one! 5/5

Best of wishes!

Hmmm
well since u asked me to criticize wat u wrote i will do just that. i like what u wrote in here, but u didnt create that poetic feeling. like u dont need rymes n stuff but u didnt have the beat. like it was jumbled up. i think u wanted to convey soemthing and say something at the same time so it didnt work out but ima read more so we shall see

Good poem.
Sounds more like a story indeed, yet is good written.
Enjoyed reading it.
Well done.
Take care

Great job!! another 5/5

I enjoyed this poem very much, and the message! Great Job!

I think this is very beautiful. You have such an amazing tallent. Never stop writing. :]

--Devon.