by Serina the Squid Jul 23, 2007
category :
Life, society /
about society
Don't demand. |
by Jenni Marie
Okay, I LOVED the ending. It was hard hitting and intense. |
by Michelle18
Nicely written...i love the rhyme sceme...its very interesting .... again 5/5 |
by Melpomene
I think this is the best one I have read of yours so far. I liked the rhyme of the last two lines it was really effective and made the rhyme stand out. Quite an interesting read with an effective last stanza. A good effort when writing this poem. Keep it up. ~mel |
It has a good rhyme i really liked it. |
by DAM
I LIKE THAT POEM HOW LONG YOU BEEN WRITIN' I THINK THIS 1 IS THA BETTER OF THA THREE |