Tear gas

by Cryiing4Hiim   Jul 23, 2007


Yo have casted a Shadow over me,
i cant see now,
i think you did it on purpose,
so i cant see the other guys that like me,
i want you too be gone,
but i want you to be here at the same time,
i am so dazed and confused,
i think the shadow you have casted on me is more like tear gas,
i cant breathe anymore,
i think i am fading away slowly but surely...
so when i am gone i hope you are happy,
with the knowledge that you made me fade away,
i still hope you miss me,
i still love you with all my heart...

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  • 17 years ago

    by Roxiee An

    Excellent as a poem
    but too sad
    just on verge of crying
    5/5 for it
    keep writing poems like these but never be like this
    best wishes
    Rohan
    take care

  • 17 years ago

    by Corruption

    This is a great poem good job!!
    lots of feeling in it

    keenan