by aDORKable x3 Jul 23, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
I've given my heart up; you've seen my real self - |
Awehh ! That`s cuute. He better not effing let you fall or else he`ll have a whole heap of broken limbs courtesy of Jenna lol..but even if he does Darling, know that I will always be here to catch you, okay? I love you and don`t ever doubt that ! |
Excellent poem. Very heartfelt and captivating. All the stanzas are incredible. Wondeful choice of words here and I absolutely love the last two lines. Simply amazing. Great job! 5/5 |
by Nix
Amazing poem. Topic is great and you wrote this piece superbly. Second stanza is incredibly good! Atmosphere that you created is also great. You described emotions excellently. 5/5 |
by nikki
I can relate to this piece, and the ending was perfect. another beautifully written poem. |
Perfect ending, that's all I can say. |